Requesting Feedback from a Supervisor

Hello, I've recently completed the report on our latest project, and I would greatly appreciate your feedback. Understanding your perspective can help me improve my work in the future. I've emailed you the document this morning. Could you please review it and provide your thoughts? I'm especially interested in your opinions on the project's effectiveness and areas for improvement. If it's convenient for you, we could discuss this further during our next meeting. Thank you for your guidance.